Friday, June 28, 2013

Character Sketches, Different Races, MG world building


Many of the posts during the #MWSL craze yesterday commented on "PoC" characters, which after some figuring I understood as "people of colour", I'm sure this desire comes from agents and people writing for the Young Adult, reality based fiction market.
Any How Town is full of different races, that's what makes it interesting for me, above is Canto who makes a brief appearance in Book Two, he's an Aucassin, they're fishermen, he becomes incredibly important in Book Three, there's just one small problem, he speaks a different language than our heroes.
The second character sketch is Maihem, who is a Gardan youth, they're customs and mannerisms are very different than out heroes, his race is the enemy, but things are not always what they seem.
I love the freedom of world building, I don't know if I'd ever set a book in our modern era, I would definitely write books set in the 20's, - 50's. If Any How Town fit into any era in our world it would be a post WWI  setting, the technology is different, but the feeling is the same.
Hope to get a few more character sketches done today and also a couple of chapter punch ups would feel good too.
A.Shay Hahn

Twitter Explosion #MSWL

Yesterday was an incredible day on Twitter, a hashtag appeared "#MSWL", it stood for "Manuscript Wish List" literary agents were posting the kind of books that they would like to see, I've never seen twitter explode  like this before. I was glued to the screen for over two hours reading comments, researching agents and agencies, finding out about other MG and YA authors and books that I would like to read.
 
I also felt good about my books after reading what some agents who had turned me down for representation were looking for, and why my books do not really fit with them (as they say) my work is more Indiana Jones and they wanted something more complex, and also science or romance based, more YA than MG.
 
Not only did I find two or three new agents to follow and submit to but there were also some really good ideas that appealed to me as a writer in case I want to write a new book separate from the Any How Town series, steam punk themed work, ghost stories etc. genres that I love and will explore.
 
This is a photo of my dog and you can see that he's a little anxious, he was very patient while I worked furiously writing notes and sending out queries, and he was rewarded with a long walk down many shaded paths and long runs back and forth across a soccer field.
 
I also managed to get though my first paper copy edit of Book Two of the AHT series which is great, there's lots of corrections and notes and I'm now prepared to go into the second draft feeling very confident about the work.
 
I'd like to thank all of the agents who participated in #MSWL yesterday, it was very helpful.
cheers,
A.Shay Hahn
 


Wednesday, June 26, 2013

Thinking Back on Adventures Books

My brother used to devour these books by Enid Blyton, they were a constant in our home, I came to reading a little later in life around twelve or thirteen when I went mad for Mack Bolan books and Stephen King novels. I love the size of these books, the simplicity of them, they were a great size for a back pack or even a pocket, there would be a small pile of them stacked on top of our German Shepherd as my father drove us to the cottage in a sweltering car without air conditioning.
I remember going to England on our first huge trip across the pond to visit family and there were titles in this series that hadn't been published yet in Canada, my brother was in heaven.
When I think of my series, I think of these books, of course as you can tell from the photo my stories are different, given all the man eating turkeys chasing people around, but it's my dream of Any How Town, I don't know if  publishing these days supports books of this size or a series that continues as long as the author, not the audience, desires.
I also love the titles here, Enid Blyton guarantees adventure, whether its on an island, in a castle or up a mountain.
The beta testing has been begun, not sure how long until I hear back from one of the kids, I have to come up with ten simple questions they can answer, or maybe it's best for the parents to just tell me what the reviewer thinks.
A.Shay Hahn
 


Tuesday, June 25, 2013

Trial by Tiny Fires

A Comic Book Available for Purchase in Any How Town
 
Today I began beta testing the first book of the Any How Town series, the challenge was simple I posted on face book that anyone who wanted to read the first fifty pages could, provided they were voracious readers who would offer feedback. If they liked what they read they would get the next fifty pages.
The only catch was they had to be kids under the age of twelve.
I capped the group at four, today I am sending out the first fifty pages.
Understand something here, I have had my plays read by David Fox, Jerry  Franken,Holly Lewis, Eric Coates, Urjo Kareda, Andy McKim, Layne Coleman and a host of other incredible actors, directors and Artistic Directors but nothing in my past can compare to the nerve wracking feeling of having a kid read the start of my book and tell me if it's boring or not.
I hope to get some great structured feedback and will seriously consider any changes they suggest.
updates to come.
A.Shay Hahn

Ride the Dino Turkey! Write the Dino Turkey!

Once again when confronted with a blank piece of paper I realize how rusty my drawing skills are, I have to draw every day or things are just going to get worse. Disappointed with a couple of aspects of the piece, especially Oliver's face but it's the first of many so I'll let it go.
It's a rainy day in Toronto and the pressure headache that started yesterday is still lingering, hope to get a good chunk of editing on Book Two finished but it will be slow going and I may start to do notes on a stand alone book in case I can't get any agents to bite on the series, I may have to write an entirely different book first in order to get the series published later.
Enjoy the above image of Oliver riding a giant Gobbler, one of the many animals that live in AHT.
Congratulations to the Chicago Blackhawks and the Boston Bruins, heck of a series, heck of a game.
A.Shay Hahn
 

Monday, June 24, 2013

File Under: Lesson Learned Giant Man Edition

I mentioned the Indiana Jones figures  in my last post as good looking "normal" figures I should also include a couple of the Terminator Salvation figures as well a couple of weeks ago on ebay I was looking for figures and found a great Marcus Lawbreaker figure and quickly snapped it up. Unfortunately for me I didn't check the height and bought this figure (left) who is 6" tall.
It was my mistake and I felt pretty stupid, there are large men in Any How Town and Noir Town, big dudes, just not this big. It's okay though I am going to use the jacket and the feet for a mod that I'm planning to do on one of my other figures. I need practice modding and this figure didn't cost too much so no harm done.
But always read the whole item description.
A.Shay Hahn


Words From "the Agent Game"


A flower in Stanley Park 
I read this tweet from "the Agent Game" today, "Telling me your book improves after a few chapters is a bad idea. Telling me your proposed series gets better a few books in is ridiculous.".It took me back to how I phrased the final part of my post about how I'm having a hard time getting a literary agent. I don't think that the above quote it applies to my work, the central mystery of the first books is introduced on the first page and the arch mystery that spans all four is introduced on the third page.
When I first set down to write the series I went through my crazy stack of notebooks, notes and drawings and made sure that my points were in order, my experience writing plays always comes in handy when getting story together, I wrote what had to be there first and then coloured the picture in, so I have a lot of confidence in the structure of books one and two.
Actually I'm quite proud of how the whole thing fits together from Book One to Book Four, every question that I asked, I've been able to answer, each character has there place and function, each object has a reason to be in the story.
Sometimes I worry that the voice I wrote with is too "workmanlike" but I wanted the tone of the narration to be gentle given the audience that the books are aimed at, I find no fault with that, it may feel like it lacks colour in the first few pages but set up are set ups and must be treated that way, all in all I do feel good about the work.
I suppose I'm just feeling sensitive right now, have a pounding headache from the crazy barometric pressure, even took a pain reliever, which I never do.
A.Shay Hahn
 

Glue, Headaches and Indiana Jones

I was going to submit this year to the Gladstone Hotel's, "If Walls Could Talk"  exhibit for March 2014, I thought it would be great to have over a dozen pieces finished and create some kind of narrative that links the pieces. Unfortunately after taking a survey of my progress I decided that I wouldn't be able to devote the time to get them all completed. When you commit to building more hyper real dioramas the amount of work you have to do becomes astronomical.
One of the hurdles are the figures, it's difficult to find heavily articulated figures that look like normal people, if you are looking for these your best bet is Indiana Jones.
What you see on the left is how he arrives, the next step is to find different heads for the figures to make each one different from the next, it's also important to make sure the heads fit, this may take some carving, drilling and gluing.
After that you have to paint them, I have yet to get into painting figures, luckily I have a friend who has great tips, the Internet is full of tutorials as well. None of the figures shown above have been painted. It's a daunting task, I may have to take another year to get all the pieces ready, so I may only be working intermittently on the dioramas for the next while.
I don't like this feeling, it bugs me, but it's what necessary if I want these things to look perfect when they're shot and turned into prints.
In Any How Town news I have just returned from a short vacation in Vancouver and am getting back into Book Two. I'm still looking for a book agent for the first book, the right person is out there, I just haven't found them yet.
I think I'll also do some drawings to post here of some crazy action shots of things that may or may not happen in the first four book of the series.
Stay cool and find that Red Panda,
A.Shay Hahn


Friday, June 14, 2013

My Challenges In the Agency Game, An Open Letter

 
 Our heroes, who I will tell you about if you ask, but you have to ask, and also
be a literary agent.
I love twitter, twitter has been extremely helpful in the process of submitting my book to agents, twitter is to literary agents what MySpace was to bands, what facebook is to theatre makers, it's concise and most of the agents there will respond to questions when asked.
It's a strange time in publishing, perhaps as strange as looking for a record deal or getting people to see a play, all of these art forms are said to be threatened right now, by what? By the same media that the artists use to promote their work? By large televisions or just the economy itself.
Everywhere I go I see people reading, I'm not worried about that, I'm more concerned with an agent missing an opportunity to find out about this wonderful world that I have created.
I asked one agent on twitter if she ever went to the author's website or blog, and she replied, (thank you @literaricat) that she did if she was interested enough in the writer's work. I found this to  be encouraging, I'm sure any agent who gets this far (to the blog) would probably be impressed by the volume of models and drawings and thoughts that I've posted here as I've worked on the books, yes books, the first story arc is four books long, it's just a matter of waiting for the right agent, the one who does follow the links to this spot.
Most agencies ask for a ten page sample of your work and then tell you they aren't "a good fit". I do think I have a few  things stacked against me with this series and they are the following
1) I have not been previously published anywhere except a book of poetry a long while ago, I have had plays produced in Canada but my primary focus over the past ten years has been my career as a painter/illustrator (all of which can be seen at the madcraftshoppe blog, see links) so I am untested in their eyes, I think that alone is a turn off for most agents.
2) My main character lives on a farm - this only occurred to me recently- Oliver is not an orphan, he comes from a large tight family, they aren't poor and is there any market out there for a kid who lives on a farm, I think the word "farm" itself is a turn off for some agents. But Oliver is more special than you think, Oliver is small and Oliver listens, he discovers things by the sheer act of listening, Oliver makes friends and the most important part of these books is the network of friends that Oliver builds just by being himself. He unravels a huge mystery, one that exposes secrets that effect the entire State just by listening and having friends, of course he gets into incredibly dangerous and unique situations along the way, but the root of the character is his character. The character that comes from being raised on a farm by a strong and loving family, he navigates the risks and challenges that come his way on his own, but it is the heart of the character that solves the riddles and problems.
3)Eaglet is a princess, in the query I call her a "headstrong Indian princess" and saying that she's a princess implies she lives in a castle with a retinue etc. She does not, she is a warrior princess and comes from very different circumstances, but the word has too many associations, but it's the right word to describe her station.
4) The world is unique, Any How Town is a genre that I call "Farm Punk", it's not Steam Punk, it's completely different, it's a place where two legged running machines are raced for entertainment, where giant dogs walk alongside their masters, where every citizen is or has been a soldier. I don't want to give too much away but I guarantee you there is no place like Any How Town, but since the world unfolds over four books it takes time to explain these things, longer than a ten page excerpt can explain.
Those are my thoughts on some of the challenges that I have.
back to the work,
A.Shay Hahn
 
 
 


Sunday, June 9, 2013

My Studio current shots


Here are a couple of photos of the studio after I spent most of the afternoon getting it tidied up, there isn't a painting in sight and instead there are box dioramas in many different stages of completion taking up every available spot.
I'm not even going to be working on them for a while, it was just so out of control I had to tame it for when I return to the basement to start finishing them one by one and then moving them to the table (second photo) which will be converted into a light box for staging and photos.
Until that time I'll be finishing the mural at the Cameron House this week and then working on the second book of the AHT series.
cheers,
A.Shay Hahn


Wednesday, June 5, 2013

Drama In A Seedy Dive



Messing around with black and white and filters in a seedy bar, trying to create as much drama as possible with light alone. This is going to be the most prop heavy of all the builds and will cost a few bucks (on ebay) to get it right. Did you know that ONE 1/12 scale liquor bottle is around $6.00 retail ? That is insane so I'll be on the lookout for cheaper ones for sure and I think I'll make a lot of the glassware out of clear straws. But there is going to be a huge wall of framed photos and other bric a bric that really has to fill the space and give it atmosphere.
A.Shay Hahn


Monday, June 3, 2013

Popsicle Stick Two Car Garage and Staircases



A quick tutorial on staircases, I've posted one before but here's another one. I used two tongue depressors as the left side and then stood the dominoes on end. I used some really skinny dowels to act as a support and then let the whole thing dry. Once dry I repeated the same process on the other side of the stairs then tilted the diorama on it's back and attached the staircase.
The photo is just a progress shot to show you what the treads of the staircase will look like.
The next shot is the base coated garage without signs, props etc.
The second photo is another process shot.
The third photo is of these cool toothpicks that have these great notched tops they will make great balusters for staircases, inspiration is everywhere in the Dollar Store you just have to look at it.
In Book News I've submitted to three more agents and am working on the second book, let's hope by the end of the month I have someone repping these great stories.
A.Shay Hahn